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prewiev to an original story by menial (might take some time before the real deal and some changes might be done)
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prewiev to an original story by menial (might take some time before the real deal and some changes might be done)
narrator: long ago a woman named pandora recieved a box, inside the box all of the worlds suffering was, she had been told not to open it but she wanted to know what was in it, when it was opened all of the horrors within was realesed, i was unlucky enough to see when it happened, i saw something no man should have seen, i was punished for putting my nose where it didnt belong
*a boy with a terrified expression is standing next to a demon, the demon jumps at him and the boy screams*
narrator: i gained immortallity..... but the price was to high, though immortallity may seem like a blessing to some, to me it is a curse, i swore to root out these creatures and lessen the pain humanity got from that box so that no one would have to suffer any more from these wretched creatures.
*the end*
well i would say that it is coming soon but it might take long so im not gonna say that, tell me what you think please
*a boy with a terrified expression is standing next to a demon, the demon jumps at him and the boy screams*
narrator: i gained immortallity..... but the price was to high, though immortallity may seem like a blessing to some, to me it is a curse, i swore to root out these creatures and lessen the pain humanity got from that box so that no one would have to suffer any more from these wretched creatures.
*the end*
well i would say that it is coming soon but it might take long so im not gonna say that, tell me what you think please
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Re: prewiev to an original story by menial (might take some time before the real deal and some changes might be done)
Akkatin gets immortality too? XD
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