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"Afraid"- An Original Poem, by Stardust
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"Afraid"- An Original Poem, by Stardust
I am afraid.
Afraid to make exchange or to rearrange,
Afraid to speak my mind in fears of sounding, strange.
Afraid to do what I cannot with the chance of being shamed.
My mind and talents are what I am.
When besieged with words of stone, I fall apart.
My very essence is blown back to its start.
Like a powerful kingdom after a great storm,
I am left picking up the shattered pieces, of something once glorious.
Constantly in doubt of who I am meant to be.
Questioning whether or not I am truly free.
Forever being encouraged, comforted, yet insulted and abandoned as well.
My thoughts manifest into it's own being,
Eternally arguing with what I am seeing.
In the blur of reality and dream,
I have become my own enemy...
I am afraid.
...But some how, every morning.
I find it in me, to wake up for another day.
I find it in me to hope that the ones I love will stay.
I find it in me to keep my doubt at bay.
To draw one more picture,
To see that the ones I love have not yet gone away,
To finish what I started,
Is to combat what we see, as the "impossible"
For I may be afraid,
But with fear.... comes hope.
Afraid to make exchange or to rearrange,
Afraid to speak my mind in fears of sounding, strange.
Afraid to do what I cannot with the chance of being shamed.
My mind and talents are what I am.
When besieged with words of stone, I fall apart.
My very essence is blown back to its start.
Like a powerful kingdom after a great storm,
I am left picking up the shattered pieces, of something once glorious.
Constantly in doubt of who I am meant to be.
Questioning whether or not I am truly free.
Forever being encouraged, comforted, yet insulted and abandoned as well.
My thoughts manifest into it's own being,
Eternally arguing with what I am seeing.
In the blur of reality and dream,
I have become my own enemy...
I am afraid.
...But some how, every morning.
I find it in me, to wake up for another day.
I find it in me to hope that the ones I love will stay.
I find it in me to keep my doubt at bay.
To draw one more picture,
To see that the ones I love have not yet gone away,
To finish what I started,
Is to combat what we see, as the "impossible"
For I may be afraid,
But with fear.... comes hope.
Last edited by Stardust the Undying on Sat Feb 13, 2016 5:35 am; edited 1 time in total
Re: "Afraid"- An Original Poem, by Stardust
Lovely poem Dusty! Tad emotional, perhaps based on yourself even.
Minor typo "I am left picking up the shatters pieces, of something once glorious."
Do tell me all of the things that inspired you to write this poem and what it's based on.
Minor typo "I am left picking up the shatters pieces, of something once glorious."
Do tell me all of the things that inspired you to write this poem and what it's based on.
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Re: "Afraid"- An Original Poem, by Stardust
α27theDemonKnight wrote:Lovely poem Dusty! Tad emotional, perhaps based on yourself even.
Minor typo "I am left picking up the shatters pieces, of something once glorious."
Do tell me all of the things that inspired you to write this poem and what it's based on.
All I can say is that this isn't a poem about MY life specifically....
This is a poem, about life itself.
Re: "Afraid"- An Original Poem, by Stardust
Well Dusty you out did yourself on this one its prefect and Brilliant absolutely Divine. Keep Up the good work Dusty
Re: "Afraid"- An Original Poem, by Stardust
Very well written. I like it.
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Do you do this on your own?
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