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"Afraid"- An Original Poem, by Stardust

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Post by StardoostLegend Fri Feb 12, 2016 4:31 am

I am afraid.
Afraid to make exchange or to rearrange,
Afraid to speak my mind in fears of sounding, strange.
Afraid to do what I cannot with the chance of being shamed.
My mind and talents are what I am.
When besieged with words of stone, I fall apart.
My very essence is blown back to its start.
Like a powerful kingdom after a great storm,
I am left picking up the shattered pieces, of something once glorious.
Constantly in doubt of who I am meant to be.
Questioning whether or not I am truly free.
Forever being encouraged, comforted, yet insulted and abandoned as well.
My thoughts manifest into it's own being,
Eternally arguing with what I am seeing.
In the blur of reality and dream,
I have become my own enemy...
I am afraid.

...But some how, every morning.
I find it in me, to wake up for another day.
I find it in me to hope that the ones I love will stay.
I find it in me to keep my doubt at bay.
To draw one more picture,
To see that the ones I love have not yet gone away,
To finish what I started,
Is to combat what we see, as the "impossible"
For I may be afraid,
But with fear.... comes hope.


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Post by α27theDemonKnight Fri Feb 12, 2016 8:47 pm

Lovely poem Dusty! Tad emotional, perhaps based on yourself even.
Minor typo "I am left picking up the shatters pieces, of something once glorious."
Do tell me all of the things that inspired you to write this poem and what it's based on.
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Post by StardoostLegend Sat Feb 13, 2016 5:34 am

α27theDemonKnight wrote:Lovely poem Dusty! Tad emotional, perhaps based on yourself even.
Minor typo "I am left picking up the shatters pieces, of something once glorious."
Do tell me all of the things that inspired you to write this poem and what it's based on.

All I can say is that this isn't a poem about MY life specifically....
This is a poem, about life itself.
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Post by Lord Beerus Sat Feb 13, 2016 6:15 am

Well Dusty you out did yourself on this one its prefect and Brilliant absolutely Divine. Keep Up the good work Dusty
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Post by Derpy Mon Feb 15, 2016 8:17 am

Very well written. I like it.
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Post by Blue Mon Feb 15, 2016 9:17 am

Do you do this on your own?
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