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A Zombie Acopolypse Fanfic (Full Version) Chapter 1.
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A Zombie Acopolypse Fanfic (Full Version) Chapter 1.
-Chapter 1 End of the beginning-
May 6/5/2013
Twilight:No,We cant let this happen,Z you been bit,We cant Save you.We can only Kill you,Since you been bitten.Shadow I dont feel like Killing Z,Please Do it.
Z:Just Do It!,I dont wanna hurt anyone,Look For The others...Menial,Murilo.Find as many Survivors as you can...Just...*Z gets up* Daah! *Z starts walking Towards Twilight*
Twilight:Shadow!,Now!
Shadow:Twilight,Might wanna take an look around you...
*Twilight Looks around and sees Zombies heading Towards Shadow and Twilight*
Twilight:We gotta Run,But...We gotta kill Z,I dont want him to suffer as an zombie even more,Il do it and we gotta run.*Twilight Grabs an baseball bat from Shadow* Goodbye...Z..*Twilight bashes Z's Head till Z was dead*.
Shadow:Now Twilight!,We cant waste anymore time!,We gotta find the others!.
*Twilight and Shadow Start Running from the Zombies*
Twilight
(I really wonder how the zombies got to us,Zombies are usually attracted by noise but we dint make almost any noice here...Strange)
-A few moments back until the Zombie Acopolypse Began-
May 6/5/2013 7AM
*Demon goes to the table,And Drink Coffee as usual*
Demon:What an wonderfull day,The sun is Shinning,I should go Swimming.
*As Demon Sips his coffe,Someone Approches him*
Xavier:*Yawns* Jeesh,Why did i get up this early...Stupid alarm Clock.
Demon:Well Sometimes Xavier,Early Bird gets the Worm.
Xavier:Erm,No.Im usually the Fish.
Demon:The fish?.What nonsense is this?
Xavier:I slap peoplez with the fish e_e.
Demon:Now Skiddadle along,I wanna finish my coffee.
Xavier:Meh,I have things to do.*Xavier Goes away from demon*
-Demon-
(It was an really peacefull day,Everyone was sleeping calmy,
I had no idea what happened,Everyone was having such fun today.
But then...It just happened everyone got separated.)
Demon:Everyone!,Lets Meet at the Post office north from here,It isent too far away,If we dont meet up today we will meet tommorow at 5 pm,Today and Tommorow!
*As demon was saying that,Everyone started Attacking the Zombies*
May 6/5/2013 3PM
Twilight
(Wheres Z,God dammit...He should be able to defend himself,But i dont know...
I need to find him...Or else. hes the guy who brought us all together,I Must Find Z.)
-About 2 Hours Ago-
Twilight:Im bored,I dont know what to do...Why wont something interesting happened around here.
*As Twilight speaks that Demon comes to Twilight*
Demon:Twilight,Sometimes something intresting might end up being bad.Just Do something that doesent bore you
Twilight:Fine,Il practice my Skills with the spear.
Demon:Now thats good,Im just gonna make some Tea,Because Im feeling like drinkin some tea.
Twilight:I might just put sugar on top....
Demon:Dont you dare Twilight.You know i hate sugar on my coffee and tea.And if you do put sugar in my tea/coffe You are dead Twilight.
Twilight:I was just joking Demon.I Wount dare to put it again in your coffe/tea.
Demon:Good,Because if you put sugar in my Tea/coffe im really gonna kill ya :v.
Twilight:Anyway.I gotta go.Later Demon
*Twilight goes to sharpen his skills with the spear*
-2 hours have passed-
May 6/5/13 3PM
*Twilight hears Demon speaking*
Twilight:Shadow,We need to get to the post office!
Shadow:Twilight i believe its better to wait for tommorow,We need to get resourses this is an zombie Acopolypse
Twilight:Fine,Then lets begin Gathering *Resourses*
*Twilight and Started to run around houses and gahterd as much as Food/Water as they can*
Twilight:
(This is strange its like...Im getting deja vu,
I feel like we ran around houses like this before
Maybe this Zombie Acopolypse is getting to me,
But it really is like i been here before,When i thouth
About Z,I also felt like i thouth about that before....)
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I Hope you like This Fanfic,Tell me your opinions on the rewiew,If you guys like the fanfic i might Start an full series of this.
May 6/5/2013
Twilight:No,We cant let this happen,Z you been bit,We cant Save you.We can only Kill you,Since you been bitten.Shadow I dont feel like Killing Z,Please Do it.
Z:Just Do It!,I dont wanna hurt anyone,Look For The others...Menial,Murilo.Find as many Survivors as you can...Just...*Z gets up* Daah! *Z starts walking Towards Twilight*
Twilight:Shadow!,Now!
Shadow:Twilight,Might wanna take an look around you...
*Twilight Looks around and sees Zombies heading Towards Shadow and Twilight*
Twilight:We gotta Run,But...We gotta kill Z,I dont want him to suffer as an zombie even more,Il do it and we gotta run.*Twilight Grabs an baseball bat from Shadow* Goodbye...Z..*Twilight bashes Z's Head till Z was dead*.
Shadow:Now Twilight!,We cant waste anymore time!,We gotta find the others!.
*Twilight and Shadow Start Running from the Zombies*
Twilight
(I really wonder how the zombies got to us,Zombies are usually attracted by noise but we dint make almost any noice here...Strange)
-A few moments back until the Zombie Acopolypse Began-
May 6/5/2013 7AM
*Demon goes to the table,And Drink Coffee as usual*
Demon:What an wonderfull day,The sun is Shinning,I should go Swimming.
*As Demon Sips his coffe,Someone Approches him*
Xavier:*Yawns* Jeesh,Why did i get up this early...Stupid alarm Clock.
Demon:Well Sometimes Xavier,Early Bird gets the Worm.
Xavier:Erm,No.Im usually the Fish.
Demon:The fish?.What nonsense is this?
Xavier:I slap peoplez with the fish e_e.
Demon:Now Skiddadle along,I wanna finish my coffee.
Xavier:Meh,I have things to do.*Xavier Goes away from demon*
-Demon-
(It was an really peacefull day,Everyone was sleeping calmy,
I had no idea what happened,Everyone was having such fun today.
But then...It just happened everyone got separated.)
Demon:Everyone!,Lets Meet at the Post office north from here,It isent too far away,If we dont meet up today we will meet tommorow at 5 pm,Today and Tommorow!
*As demon was saying that,Everyone started Attacking the Zombies*
May 6/5/2013 3PM
Twilight
(Wheres Z,God dammit...He should be able to defend himself,But i dont know...
I need to find him...Or else. hes the guy who brought us all together,I Must Find Z.)
-About 2 Hours Ago-
Twilight:Im bored,I dont know what to do...Why wont something interesting happened around here.
*As Twilight speaks that Demon comes to Twilight*
Demon:Twilight,Sometimes something intresting might end up being bad.Just Do something that doesent bore you
Twilight:Fine,Il practice my Skills with the spear.
Demon:Now thats good,Im just gonna make some Tea,Because Im feeling like drinkin some tea.
Twilight:I might just put sugar on top....
Demon:Dont you dare Twilight.You know i hate sugar on my coffee and tea.And if you do put sugar in my tea/coffe You are dead Twilight.
Twilight:I was just joking Demon.I Wount dare to put it again in your coffe/tea.
Demon:Good,Because if you put sugar in my Tea/coffe im really gonna kill ya :v.
Twilight:Anyway.I gotta go.Later Demon
*Twilight goes to sharpen his skills with the spear*
-2 hours have passed-
May 6/5/13 3PM
*Twilight hears Demon speaking*
Twilight:Shadow,We need to get to the post office!
Shadow:Twilight i believe its better to wait for tommorow,We need to get resourses this is an zombie Acopolypse
Twilight:Fine,Then lets begin Gathering *Resourses*
*Twilight and Started to run around houses and gahterd as much as Food/Water as they can*
Twilight:
(This is strange its like...Im getting deja vu,
I feel like we ran around houses like this before
Maybe this Zombie Acopolypse is getting to me,
But it really is like i been here before,When i thouth
About Z,I also felt like i thouth about that before....)
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I Hope you like This Fanfic,Tell me your opinions on the rewiew,If you guys like the fanfic i might Start an full series of this.
Last edited by Twilight on Sat Sep 05, 2015 4:40 am; edited 2 times in total
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Re: A Zombie Acopolypse Fanfic (Full Version) Chapter 1.
Well Twilight. I think you can capture our characters perfectly yknow. The lines with me anr Xavier went very smoothly. You do need someone to correct your grammar mistakes for ye. Other that. Aye you should go on with your fanfic. Interested to see what this develops into.
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Re: A Zombie Acopolypse Fanfic (Full Version) Chapter 1.
Thanks Demon,Il try to work on my grammar mistakes,Also its Updated to the full version.Its kind of short but Chapter 2 will be alot longer :I
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Re: A Zombie Acopolypse Fanfic (Full Version) Chapter 1.
This looks more like a script rather than a fanfic. If you were trying to make it a script style, good job, but I would like to see it in a story format. =3
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Re: A Zombie Acopolypse Fanfic (Full Version) Chapter 1.
Wow this is the first time I actually got to reading this fan fic O___O and I gotta say... I cannot wait to see what happens next, I haven't had much time to read anything lately, I'll catch myself up with the other chapters, keep up the good work!
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