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"The Fallen" Part 1: All that is left.

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Post by The Doctor Sat Jul 18, 2015 11:46 am

The story from Alex's perspective.

As I walk down the road, I think of the mistakes I have made. All the lives That had gone. I fell down to the ground, with blood staining my clothes. I looked at the moon, just one last time, to remember my past. I remember the good times I had, the bad times. I then close my eyes one last time, and I feel a hand grabbing my sides. I am thrown in the air, and a figure runs through the night, carrying me. I hear them walk into a place, placing my body on some hard object. I then black out.
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Post by Flip Flapper Sat Jul 18, 2015 12:38 pm

a few things, one who is Alex? 2 what kind of setting is this and 3 why was Alex there?

some more basic things for storytelling is explaining stuff, if you explain it later on im fine but it feels weird for a story to begin like this without anything else
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Post by The Doctor Sat Jul 18, 2015 2:36 pm

1. He is the main protagonist. 2. A future world. 3. It will be explained later.
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Post by Flip Flapper Sat Jul 18, 2015 2:40 pm

i didnt mean like that, you wrote as if we should know who alex is as if this was a sequel or begining of an episode later in a show
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