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Do you guys like my writing series "We are MADA"?
Do you guys like We are MADA?
Just been wondering how you guys are enjoying it, leave any suggestions on what you've liked/disliked about the story so far. I've made this post to see what I need to work on as a writer so be brutally honest yet constructive.
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Pft, Dusty why would you even make a post like dis. you know we love we are mada
Re: Do you guys like We are MADA?
I can understand why you would think that we don't like it. Most people who type up stories, they are afraid that it's not good enough. I also think this when I type up my own stories.
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Re: Do you guys like We are MADA?
i like it, i really do but since you asked i will point out some chocies i disagree with but this is not nescecarily saying i think they are bad just that i would personally have done differently
in hindsight i think it would have been better if you made completely original characters rather then basing them off some members becuse while it is kinda cool seeing them i think you would have been given more freedom if you made them from scratch, that said i think they are preety cool characters as it is i just think it may have been better to not limit yourself
it may also have been good to learn more about these characters before stuff starts going down, we barely knew anything about menial before he was hospitalized for half of season 1, i do get the impression we will learn more soon though and at least shadow seem to have a preety interesting backstory
these are the only things i can think of right now just keep up the good work man
P.S i do NOT trust Veva ._. nothing you say will make me trust her, she is the only one who could have injected it
in hindsight i think it would have been better if you made completely original characters rather then basing them off some members becuse while it is kinda cool seeing them i think you would have been given more freedom if you made them from scratch, that said i think they are preety cool characters as it is i just think it may have been better to not limit yourself
it may also have been good to learn more about these characters before stuff starts going down, we barely knew anything about menial before he was hospitalized for half of season 1, i do get the impression we will learn more soon though and at least shadow seem to have a preety interesting backstory
these are the only things i can think of right now just keep up the good work man
P.S i do NOT trust Veva ._. nothing you say will make me trust her, she is the only one who could have injected it
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Re: Do you guys like We are MADA?
M5516theMechanicalLord wrote:i like it, i really do but since you asked i will point out some chocies i disagree with but this is not nescecarily saying i think they are bad just that i would personally have done differently
in hindsight i think it would have been better if you made completely original characters rather then basing them off some members becuse while it is kinda cool seeing them i think you would have been given more freedom if you made them from scratch, that said i think they are preety cool characters as it is i just think it may have been better to not limit yourself
it may also have been good to learn more about these characters before stuff starts going down, we barely knew anything about menial before he was hospitalized for half of season 1, i do get the impression we will learn more soon though and at least shadow seem to have a preety interesting backstory
these are the only things i can think of right now just keep up the good work man
P.S i do NOT trust Veva ._. nothing you say will make me trust her, she is the only one who could have injected it
Well, since these were my first ever OC's, I wanted them to be as real-to-life as possible, I've seen several other people base Shows and Characters off their own personal events and people around them. Alex Hirsch based Gravity Falls on his childhood, but I appriciate your thoughts, especially from you menial!
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